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when the sun touches down on the mountain tops
my eyelids slowly open and i rise to greet the dusk
my awareness comes with the night time
my energy urged on by the dark sky
while the world around me sleeps i keep busy
with creative hands and unrelenting thoughts
in the night i find my solace, my breath
from the quiet dark i inhale my life
my freedom exists when the stars appear
when all else is still and i still move
there is a beckoning in the twilight
comfort in the dusk and safety at midnight
no secrets escape from the shadows surrounding
in the dark all marks are hidden away
and perhaps it is for fear of the daylight
fear of the stark reality under the sun
fear of that which reveals all of our flaws
for my breath slows as the sun rises
when it begins to rise up over the horizon
my energy falls away little by little
and soon the daylight overpowers thought
and i lay my head to rest with curtains closed
and i escape the brightness of daylight
i escape the harsh and unforgiving rays
i sleep and sleep and sleep away the days
and when the sun touches down on the mountain tops
my eyelids slowly open and i rise to greet the dusk
my eyelids slowly open and i rise to greet the dusk
my awareness comes with the night time
my energy urged on by the dark sky
while the world around me sleeps i keep busy
with creative hands and unrelenting thoughts
in the night i find my solace, my breath
from the quiet dark i inhale my life
my freedom exists when the stars appear
when all else is still and i still move
there is a beckoning in the twilight
comfort in the dusk and safety at midnight
no secrets escape from the shadows surrounding
in the dark all marks are hidden away
and perhaps it is for fear of the daylight
fear of the stark reality under the sun
fear of that which reveals all of our flaws
for my breath slows as the sun rises
when it begins to rise up over the horizon
my energy falls away little by little
and soon the daylight overpowers thought
and i lay my head to rest with curtains closed
and i escape the brightness of daylight
i escape the harsh and unforgiving rays
i sleep and sleep and sleep away the days
and when the sun touches down on the mountain tops
my eyelids slowly open and i rise to greet the dusk
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For several weeks I've been nocturnal and I've realized that part of why I like it so much is that I don't have to deal with talking to people and acting like I'm a normal, functioning human being.
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This poem gave me shivers. Well, for one, reading it at nocturnal hours myself worked that well
Especially this line: "in the dark all marks are hidden away", it has such beautiful alliteration. Thank you.
Especially this line: "in the dark all marks are hidden away", it has such beautiful alliteration. Thank you.